Monday 5 September 2016

persuasive writing

Persuasive writing
Walt write a text that will persuade others believe in our opinion
We know we have achieved this when:
  1. Introduction: stating the argument
  2. A Paragraph to explain each reason for your argument
  3. Conclusion: restating the argument
  4. Emotive language eg dangerous, unsafe
  5. Complex sentences
  6. Share your Personal Opinion
  7. Each paragraph has a main point (usually at the beginning)   Students should not wear a school uniform at school

Pros
Cones

  • You can represent your school in the community because people will be able to recognise which school you are from
  • Is cheaper clothing going to wear as well.
  • To help people know what their school logo.
  • You need to buy them each year as you grow, this costs our parents a lot of money.
  • Cheaper to buy mufti clothes.
  • You will need School Clothes and mufti clothes (weekend) so will be a greater cost.
  • School clothes are a big rip off for mass produced clothing - big demand but more expensive.

In my opinion Students should not wear School Uniform at school.
I am doing this so our mums and dads don't have to buy school uniform every year
Paragraph 1




Main point (P) we won't be the same
Because we were the same clothes everyday


  • We won't look the same wearing school clothes
Paragraph 2




Main point (P) buying school clothes
  • Every Year our parents have to buy school clothes



  • School clothes cost a lot of money to just by shorts tops jersey it cost about 112$
Paragraph 3





Main point (p) school fees
  • Our parents have to do all our  school fees every year



  • And buy school clothes
Conclusion
We should not have to wear school clothes

Introduction In my opinion Students should not wear School Uniform at school.

Paragraph 1
Because we were the same clothes everyday We won't look the same wearing school clothes every day



Paragraph 2
Every Year our parents have to buy school clothes for School it cost a lot of money to just by shorts tops jersey it cost about 112$   that insane



Paragraph 3
Our parents have to do all our  school fees every year And buy school clothes


Conclusion  We should not have to wear school  clothes

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