Tuesday 20 September 2016

how school

Indoriton
We are doing new classroom because we think our classroom’s are boring so we need to make our classroom’s exciting.  


 Door
They are special doors they are elitch sliding key cards doors. They will cost our school not to munch. But the doors only let the key cards open the door between 8:30 till 3:30 the doors will be very cool.

Wall
The walls will be colorful just like our writing and stuff we will have hanging chairs built in couers and tv’s.


Solar panel   
We need solar panels to generate power for us because then we don’t need that much power from power lines  and it will cost us less.


School name
On the school name we reckon it should be fren school  because it is native and it grows around here. So I reckon it is one of the best names for our school.




Tv
In our classroom we should have two tvs and one is in the wall and one is in the floor.The kids that want to sit on the floor can and the people who want to sit up somewhere else they can  .  


Conclusion
So do you think we need a new classroom? we do.


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Monday 5 September 2016

persuasive writing

Persuasive writing
Walt write a text that will persuade others believe in our opinion
We know we have achieved this when:
  1. Introduction: stating the argument
  2. A Paragraph to explain each reason for your argument
  3. Conclusion: restating the argument
  4. Emotive language eg dangerous, unsafe
  5. Complex sentences
  6. Share your Personal Opinion
  7. Each paragraph has a main point (usually at the beginning)   Students should not wear a school uniform at school

Pros
Cones

  • You can represent your school in the community because people will be able to recognise which school you are from
  • Is cheaper clothing going to wear as well.
  • To help people know what their school logo.
  • You need to buy them each year as you grow, this costs our parents a lot of money.
  • Cheaper to buy mufti clothes.
  • You will need School Clothes and mufti clothes (weekend) so will be a greater cost.
  • School clothes are a big rip off for mass produced clothing - big demand but more expensive.

In my opinion Students should not wear School Uniform at school.
I am doing this so our mums and dads don't have to buy school uniform every year
Paragraph 1




Main point (P) we won't be the same
Because we were the same clothes everyday


  • We won't look the same wearing school clothes
Paragraph 2




Main point (P) buying school clothes
  • Every Year our parents have to buy school clothes



  • School clothes cost a lot of money to just by shorts tops jersey it cost about 112$
Paragraph 3





Main point (p) school fees
  • Our parents have to do all our  school fees every year



  • And buy school clothes
Conclusion
We should not have to wear school clothes

Introduction In my opinion Students should not wear School Uniform at school.

Paragraph 1
Because we were the same clothes everyday We won't look the same wearing school clothes every day



Paragraph 2
Every Year our parents have to buy school clothes for School it cost a lot of money to just by shorts tops jersey it cost about 112$   that insane



Paragraph 3
Our parents have to do all our  school fees every year And buy school clothes


Conclusion  We should not have to wear school  clothes