Wednesday, 30 March 2016

RUN BIKE RUN

    The Run Bike Run
Was very hot and the ground was on fire


The race was at halswell domain.
My team was called the vipers noah did the first run i did the bike and Ethan did the second run.


In the end we came 2 out of 5 groups and i think we went really well before we had our race we were doing things with the house captains like trikey  tag and fresh cricket .


And then i washed  my brothers race then it was our race after our race i was sitting in the hot weather we had to we a hat then i sore my sisters race and then we went back to school and tidy up for today.
            


              From brayden




Thursday, 17 March 2016

brayden flag


WALT write a text that persuasive writing persuasive text
Brayden Woodgate

WALT to write a text to persuade others.

New Zealand should change the national flag

My opinion is that I believe  New Zealand should adopt the Silver Fern flag as our nation’s flag.



My first important reason  New Zealand needs to change the flag.
New Zealand has had this flag for a long time so its time so it's time to change the flag because we have changed as a country over the past 100 years.


My second most important reason  is I think New Zealand should adopt the silver fern flag because it looks too much like the Australian’s flag so we should change it. We often get mixed up with Australia because our current flags are very similar.

My third most important reason is the Silver Fern Flag looks better in the sky because it's better to see in the sky, it flies well and it’s more colourful.

Conclusion / summary
Therefore I strongly believe that New Zealand should change the flag.














IALT write a persuasive text about the NZ Flag Referendum.




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